A feeling of despair was growing in her brain. It was like a parasite slowly engulfing her sanity as well as, her rational mind. There was also a sense of oppressiveness from the rebukes and criticism thrown at her which wounded her from deep within.
Her purpose of living was slowly slipping away into oblivion and there was an emptiness instead.
Day in day out, her sorrows and anxieties haunt her like a ghost and there is a fear growing deep within, the fear of more to come. Her resilience has fallen down and the guard she had put up against all the odds was too vulnerable and was prone to breaking easily.
With closed eyes and folded hands she bowed in-front of the almighty in hope of a miracle, but the anticipation of something bad was about to happen, chocked her and made her intake shallow breaths. The minimum air required to be barely alive.
The cold hearted battle of rational and irrational mind was causing her much agony and there was faith running wild inside her, looking for a place to seek refuge.
All she wanted is to raise her voice and point her fingers at those cynical eyes. They were the reason of her being the living corpse, the only reason of her demise before actually dying.
“Weren’t they criminals?” She thought.
“Perhaps in disguise.”
Mind blowing post.
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The slight blur in the accompanying picture goes pretty well with what you have expressed in this one. Absolutely loved the choice of words as well as that of the image 🙂
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Hey, I’ve nominated you for the mystery blogger award! https://nameeraeverafter.wordpress.com/2018/06/25/mystery-blogger-award/?preview=true I see you’ve been nominated before for the same so it’s up to you whether or not you’re up for it (: Have a nice day!
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Surely, I’m. Thank You.😊 I will reply post soon.
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Surely I will.💞
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You write so well! I would love it if you could comment on my recent posts
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In one word I can say You are extraordinary talent
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Thank You. I appreciate your comment.😊
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Powerful!! Raw and honest, Thank You
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Thank You for your honest comment.😊
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Faith running wild… looking for a place of refuge…liked the expression…
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Thank You.😊
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Welcome…
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Deep ♥️
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Thank You.
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Endless
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Yes. The feeling is equivalent to misery.
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👍🏼👍🏼
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Hello Amartya I have Nominated you for the ” Mystery Blogger Award”. I am looking forward to reading your answers. You do deserve this nomination my friend. Check here :https://myplace3187.wordpress/2018/06/22/msytery-blogger-award
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You are really inspiring for me. Your comments really do encourage me a lot. Thank You for the nomination! 😊
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Hi Amartya I am happy you say I inspire and encourage you. I am always here to help you and others. Thank you very much Amartya !!
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Greatful to know that.😊
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any time Amartya or others.
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The title is intriguing and beautifully written! Criticism is indeed cold hearted.
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And there is agony behind every criticism.
Thank You.😊
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Very powerful.
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You all inspire me a lot. Thank You.😊
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Heart wrenching
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Thank You. 😊
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